Thursday, September 24, 2009

Finally!

i FINALLY finished my sonnet...its not that good..lol it doesnt fit the rules of a sonnet exactly..i dont think all my stresses are in the right place..oh well..i did the best i could and.. ITS DONE! here it is...and a couple other poems that LLATL has forced me to write..lol the cookie poem is the only poem that i've written that i like...haha 

The rain is coming quickly from the sky
The sun has gone away and wont come back
The lightning pierces darkness with a smack
The thunder booms and makes the baby cry
Electricity has said it's good-bye
Without the heater cold comes through the house
Sneaking through the cracks like a little mouse
A strike of lightning makes the big tree lie

The rain slows down and slowly goes away
Electricity comes back like a friend
The rain is gone for now, so says TV
Sunshine comes out and brightens up the day
Moms try to keep the kids, but in the end
The kids go out to play and get muddy

Cookies
Cookies are yummy
and fill my tummy
They're bad if they're gummy
So watch what you eat
and dont be a dummy!

Radio
It sits there on the table
Waiting for the moment it can start singing
Wish they would turn off the cable
Knowing it is able
To get them all dancing

Sunflowers
They bend and sway in the wind 
Their beauty shines in the sun
The smell of a sunflower makes some sneeze
But for others , the sight of just one
Makes them smile and have fun


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